How tone of voice and brand language workshops can simplify content production

2011 Port Strategic Planning Forum

When writing copy for businesses, it can be difficult to get everyone to agree on what is ‘right’. As a copywriter, your words may be reviewed by several stakeholders, all with slightly different ideas of how their company communicates.

Copywriters can either muddle on, hoping to assuage multiple stakeholders and get their copy signed off after a bit of a slog, or you can unify your reviewers by getting them to agree a canonical tone of voice for their brand.

Bring together representatives from every department and get them talking about brand language. Get them to share their view of the company’s voice. And then write it all down, and get them to sign it off.

A short workshop can be enough to make everyone feel heard, and can be enough to produce a tone of voice document that everyone can agree to. Once the tone of voice is in black and white, and no longer an ephemeral mish-mash of beliefs, you can get writing. Not only will you encounter less resistance from your reviewers, but you will also have a framework to fall back on, should anyone challenge or question your copy.

Indeed, you’ll no longer be arguing about the tone of voice, though you may find yourself discussing whether your copy is in keeping with the documented brand voice – which is a far easier conversation to have!

When to use brand language or tone of voice workshops

Not every business needs to run a workshop. For small clients and startups it’s often quicker and easier (and cheaper for the client) to decide a tone of voice by simply talking about it.

However, brand language or tone of voice workshops are great for…

Companies that have grown

Many of my clients need help because they’ve grown from a small company doing one thing to a larger company doing several things, and during that growth they lose the ability to clearly explain what they do. Different ideas about the business compete for prominence, and often it’s easier for an external agency to bring some clarity.

Companies with several strong departments

Copy can easily become the battleground for corporate turf wars. Warring factions fight for control of areas of strategic importance (like the home page). Engender a spirit of cooperation and peace by bringing the warmongers together, and getting them to play nice.

If you’re interested to know how a brand language workshop could help your organisation speak with a clear, consistent voice, get in touch!

The art of copywriting: be positive and optimistic

 

Copywriters have a job to do. We have to write the words that do the business. In this blog post series I’ll consider some of the finer points of copywriting – the little things that make a big difference; the tricks and touches that lift copy and make it more persuasive, better at selling and more likely to create a good impression.

Here’s the first part of this series:

Be positive and optimistic

Good copy carries energy and makes statements with positivity and certainty. Bad copy stumbles the reader over hiccups and hillocks, depositing turds of negativity along the way, subliminally suggesting disaster while promising unearthly delights.

Let’s look at some examples of how to fill your copy with energy.

Don’t write:

This training programme is designed to teach you everything you need to know about psychiatry. After three years of hard work you should be equipped to treat the worst conditions of the human mind. There’s no doubt that you will be able to command a killer salary after completing this training.

The example above contains hesitancy (designed, should) and negative words (hard, worst, doubt, killer) which, when assembled together, leave the reader with a vague feeling of failure. Even when the overall message is positive, these bitter tastes of negativity remain. So when you want to sell something, and create a positive feeling in your reader, chose your words carefully.

Do write:

This training programme teaches you everything you need to know about psychiatry. Completing this course will qualify you to treat a wide variety of psychological conditions.

You’ll also notice that replacing ‘designed to teach’ with ‘teaches’ creates a much more compact and direct sentence. As a writer you should be on guard for phrases like ‘designed to’ or ‘gives you the ability to’ because there’s a good chance they are slowing down your sentences and dulling your copy.

Where do copywriters go for inspiration?

Web designers love to show off, and they love to share inspiring design. There are many sites that help designers share the good stuff, and I’m jealous!

When I want inspiration as a copywriter, where can I look? When I find fantastic copy, where can I share it?

Nowhere. Or so it seems.

So how about I set up a simple site, give you (as a copywriter) your own login details, and then we can fill the site with great copy!

Let’s spend more time complimenting great copy and less time criticising the bad stuff.

What do you think?

ADDENDENDENDUM: Following such a positive reaction to the idea, I set to work and created drivvel.com – a place to share and discover inspiring copy and content

Content strategy applied: creating better web content with page tables

 

 

Content creation can be an impossible task. After a content strategist has sketched out the grand plan, a copywriter must eventually write something.

Pen hits paper. Keys rattle. Words emerge. And it’s all wrong. Horribly wrong. Marketing hates it, sales despise it, it makes the MD feel physically sick and someone in HR cried after reading it. Wrong, wrong, wrong. It’s too much wiffle, and not enough waffle. It doesn’t mention the G-Fex haemoglobber, or the Windlespan Chingnits. It doesn’t appeal to Middle England, and the language is too salesy, or not salesy enough, depending on who you ask, and the time of day you ask them.

To sum up, nobody can agree on what the content should be like. And in part that’s because every person reviewing the content is considering too many things. They’re not just considering what is written, but also how it’s written.

Divide and conquistador!

Getting copy approved by multiple corporate gatekeepers is easier when you split the task into two stages= content + style.

And page tables are the perfect container for pure content. Page tables are just a document you use to record the content requirements for pages of your website. You can specify the key messages, the audience, the calls to action, how the page fits with other sections and so on. Content strategists use page tables as a way to pass explicit instructions to content creators, so the wider strategy is implemented as intended.

The cunning copywriter’s secret weapon

Copywriters can also use page tables purely as a device to ease the difficult journey to FINAL copy. Rather than overwhelming reviewers with full-on copy, you can get acquainted over a page table. Tease them with content requirements. Tantalise them with your thoroughness and consideration of their key messages. Subdue them with content, because only then can you woo them with style.

Once reviewers have seen and signed off the page tables, agreeing the precise content for each page, you can write copy. And because stakeholders have been involved, they’re much more likely to love it.

Page table example (Google Doc template)

WriteClub – and the meet goes on

Write Club London

WriteClub, the informal meet-up group for all kinds of writers, approaches its second birthday. So here’s a little update on the group…

For the past two years we’ve met regularly in Brighton (WriteClub London meets once a month). Every month, a small number of writers meet for coffee (in the morning) or beer (in the evening).

Numbers vary at every meeting, attracting between 4 and 25 people (usually somewhere in the middle). Our conversations cover everything from the challenges of freelancing and finding writing work that pays to the craft of the creative writer. WriteClub regulars include copywriters, authors, poets, journalists, novelists and artists. Our get-togethers are friendly, informal and inclusive. We’re just a bunch of writers (and non-writers) getting together to talk, about anything.

A new venue for WriteClub Brighton mornings

The next WriteClub morning (morning meets are the second Thursday of every month= 8 September) is shifting venue to Small Batch Coffee on Wilbury Avenue in Hove. This is purely because a number of members asked if we could change location occasionally. So we’re moving to a new location that’s much nearer to my flat. How convenient!

Some handy links:

WriteClub website

WriteClub London meetup group

WriteClub Google Group (for WriteClubbers in any location)

 

 

Kendall Copywriting is three!

Lemon Birthday Cake

Actually, we turned three a couple of months ago, but were too busy to notice!

Our third year has been our busiest yet. In addition to working with freelancers, small web agencies and local businesses, we’ve been doing more work with big brands and large organisations.

Bigger projects have given us the chance to work with new consultants, writers and editors – and we hope to do more of this in our fourth year of business.

Thanks to all of the clients who have trusted in our skills, and to the partners who have helped us deliver great work, consistently.

 

 

Brighton Digital Festival – celebrating digital culture this September

Brighton Digital Festival

A bunch of Brighton people  have been busy creating a digital festival for Brighton. The festival connects a collection of conferences and workshops and wraps them all up with a massive dose of digital art to create a month-long orgy of digitalism.

In addition to performances, exhibitions, experiences and fairs, a host of Brighton’s regular meet-ups are becoming part of the festival, including our very own WriteClub!

Head over to brightondigitalfestival.co.uk for more on the festival (the website was designed and built by the talented Mr Aizlewood of Carbon Graffiti, with a little copy input from me).

 

How not to write web copy: a home page critique

A screenshot of the home page of CRPZ Ltd

 

Following my email copy critique, I decided to review corporate web copy. Thanks to a tweet from Jonathan Norris, web editor of Freelance Advisor, I discovered the perfect website to critique. Let’s begin!

The who, the what, the why

I’m going to refer to this company as CRPZ Ltd. That’s not their real name, but their actual name is another meaningless acronym, one that offers no clues about what they do.

Their company name is supported by a mysterious tagline, ‘International Media Ventures’. ‘Ventures’ makes me think of venture capitalists – people who invest in businesses. So do they invest in media projects?

The main image is of construction workers in sillouette. So the image doesn’t make any sense in relation to the tagline. And a caption, ‘Nothing is permanent except change’ only adds to the mystery. But that’s okay. Let’s read some copy and make sense of this business!

The web copy

Here’s the first paragraph:

CRPZ Ltd is an independent, full-service Organisation Design and Project Development firm serving public institutions and companies as well as their stakeholders globally.

So CRPZ Ltd design organisations? Interesting. And they develop projects. I wonder if CRPZ Ltd specialise in an industry. Oh yes – media! So they must design media businesses and develop media projects. Okay – I feel like a detective  but perhaps we’re getting somewhere.

Paragraph two:

Clients have since 2002 relied on a wide range of growth capabilities and resources as well as innovative management strategies.

This is badly written, but I can assume they mean that clients go nuts over CRPZ’s ‘growth capabilities’ and ‘innovative management strategies’.

I honestly don’t know what all this means, but it sounds like CRPZ have made the very common mistake of airing their internal workings and presenting them as benefits. Having innnovative management strategies is just wonderful, but it only matters to your clients if there is a direct benefit to them. And ‘growth capabilities’ is supremely vague. If you can help me grow my business, tell me how!

It goes on…

CRPZ is unrelenting in the pursuit of our clients’ objectives and we treat every challenge as unique – you’ll find no cookie-cutter approach to solutions here.

I like the idea of them being unrelenting, but in what will they not relent? You’d think it was some kind of secret thing that they don’t want to talk about. Why so coy? Just tell me what you do!

CRPZ has the relationships, partnerships and experience required to fully support public institutions and companies – we seek to leverage our network and impressive track record of solutions to help you achieve your objectives.

I’m disappointed (and pained by) the density of management-speak (‘leverage’, ‘solutions’), and still clueless about what they do.

Our track record covers the spectrum across many industries.

What spectrum? Which industries? How can I engage with this when I know nothing about it? What are they trying to hide?

We usually begin with the end in mind – aligning all components of an enterprise with the operating context to achieve successful outcomes.

Desperately lacking details. No evidence of actual work being done by this company, so it’s impossible to be interested in it.

Establishing leading edge and truly international communications capabilities we do particularly well.

A slightly Yoda-like flourish at the end, but still no clear picture of what they do. How many meaningless words can you put in a row before you absolutely must insert something factual?

CRPZ maintains associated offices in Washington DC, Kabul and Karachi.

Interesting. Offices in USA, Afghanistan and Pakistan. Still no clues about what the people in those offices actually do, but I’m glad the office locations are not as secret as their services (or products!).

The verdict

To be generous to the business that owns this website, we could argue that what seems to be meaningless jargon might actually be perfectly obvious to the right people (such as their ideal client). But I believe that every website’s home page should be clear to all – even to the uninitiated.

All of the problems with this copy stem from a lack of clarity. An over-reliance on smart-sounding but materially vacant business-speak leaves the copy with little meat. It’s a big cream-puff of nothing that leaves you feeling cheated.

Jargon and words that sound clever are appealing to a certain breed of business person – probably because they believe that big words connote big things. It’s a copywriter’s job to help these people see the light.

Content strategy applied: 5 tips for getting web content approved

DC State Fair Jam Contest

As I noted in my post defining ‘content strategy’, words and pictures are messy things, and organising and approving them is often a tricky process to navigate. In any project there will be many different opinions of what is ‘right’.

Content strategists, web editors and copywriters must all deal with the challenges of getting content accepted by reviewers. Here are five tips for making the process smooth and painless…

1. Reduce the number of reviewers

Every content reviewer should have a purpose, and not all content reviewers should review all of the content. So assign specialists to focus on their specialist area of the content. Don’t let Bob from supply chain review copy that is under the auspices of the sales team. Bob would only ruin it.

2. Structure the review process

Give reviewers instructions. Tell them what to look for, what kind of feedback is required, how to provide that feedback and when to provide it. Don’t let reviewers go off piste.

3. Separate style and content

This is my favourite technique for getting copy past reviewers (especially in large organisations).

The trick is to split the content from the style. So before you produce the content, you define the content with an outline. You can simply produce an outline of the content (whether it’s a page, a video, picture or audio clip) in rough form or bullet points. The outline simply details:

  • the information to be included in the content
  • the purpose of the content
  • the intended audience of the content
  • next steps – where does the content lead people?

You then give the content outlines to your nominated reviewers, along with instructions for reviewing it.

By doing this you allow people to reflect on the bare-bones content, without distracting them with matters of style or tone.

Once the outlines are approved, you can create content, using your outline as the foundation. Because your reviewers have been involved with the content already, they will be more likely to approve the finished content. And the final content reviews will focus purely on details of style and tone, because the information has been approved (by them!).

Okay, so you might think that creating outlines of every page will take too much time, but these outlines are more than a great device for approving content; they’re great to work from. Content outlines are useful if you’re producing your own content, and invaluable if the content production is being done by others, because it tells them precisely what is required.

4. Stay strong

Reviewers can be wrong. And if they’re wrong, and are requesting or demanding changes to the content that deviate from the style guide or project objectives, then tell them.

5. Have a client-side champion

If you’re producing content as an external supplier, it helps to have someone on the client’s side that believes in, and supports, your work. Your champion will need to dissuade doubters and gently convert dissenters (or crush them!).

Do you have any other ideas for making the content approval process easy and efficient? Share them!

Content strategy: a definition

The War Room

How do you define ‘content strategy’?

At a recent meeting of the Brighton Content Strategy Meetup (BCSM) the assembled writers, editors and strategists discussed the meaning of ‘content strategy’.

The chat was fun, but I resolved to try to define content strategy myself, if only so I have a handy definition to offer anyone who asks. Here goes…

Content strategy is:

A process used by organisations to define and plan how words, pictures, audio and video (content) are used to achieve objectives (such as increased sales or a reduction in support calls).

A content strategy provides a framework for the creation, publication and curation of content, and aligns those activities with the organisation’s wider strategy.

But this is how I explain content strategy to clients…

Content strategy is a response to the challenges posed by website content. Words, sounds, pictures and videos are all expensive to produce, difficult to maintain and easy to get wrong.

The best way to produce useful content is by taking a structured, strategic approach to content production, publication and curation.

A structured approach to content creation means…

So rather than just writing copy for your website, we take the time to think about what you are trying to achieve and how your copy can help you achieve it. Rather than just sprucing your existing content, we audit your content so we can judge it. Rather than letting your website drift along, we plan for future updates and ongoing maintenance.

Content strategy takes away the pain of…

As a copywriter I’m compelled to relate content strategy back to the problems it solves. In my experience, content strategy helps organisations avoid:

  • wasting money on content that doesn’t do a job
  • wasting time on haphazard content creation processes (rather than planning and structuring the work)
  • wasting company time on the content sign-off process (which can be a highly political process)
  • letting a website fall into disrepair with outdated or irrelevant content
  • letting a website become a corporate dumping ground for information.

So that’s my take on what ‘content strategy’ means. What do you think of my definition? How would you change it or improve it? All suggestions are welcome!

BrilliantFreelancer.com is live!

Brilliant Freelancer book cover

Brilliant Freelancer, the book I’ve been busy writing, is due out in May. But the website is alive today: www.brilliantfreelancer.com

Check out the website, and be sure to register – you’ll get a free chapter and the chance to win Brilliant Freelancer.

I’ll also be producing additional freelance advice, so if you are freelance, or thinking about making the leap, stay tuned!

Thanks to Mike Hadfield of Volicol for designing and building the Brilliant Freelancer website.

Brighton’s first content strategy meetup

Approaches to web content strategy

Brighton’s first content strategy meetup is happening on 23 February at iCrossing’s office in central Brighton.

Here’s the blurb from Charlie Peverett’s event page:

You are cordially invited to Brighton’s inaugural CS meetup! For strategists, web writers, editors, UX designers and IAs; from Brighton, London and beyond.

Starting with drinks and nibbles in the iCrossing canteen, we’ll kick things off with a group discussion around the theme (honouring the recent TedxBrighton)

Reasons to be cheerful (about the future of content)

If you’ve got a reason to be cheerful, please submit it (with URL if relevant) to charlie.peverett@icrossing.co.uk by 5pm on the day, and be ready to tell us all what it’s all about.

Thanks to Richard Ingram for the lovely diagram illustrating this post.

Copywriters wanted for upcoming projects

Do you write copy?

Kendall Copywriting, in partnership with The Copy House, is looking for talented and experienced freelance writers – especially those who ‘get’ the web.

You can see our job ad on WiredSussex, but here’s the summary:

As a copywriting and content agency based in the centre of Brighton, we devote ourselves to creating finely crafted copy and content for major brands all over the UK.

As well as being a team of writers, we work with brand language consultants, content strategists and user experience specialists to make sure each piece of writing we produce is strategically sound, creatively endearing and forms a healthy part of the bigger picture.

Some of our end clients include YMCA Training, Fitness First, NHS, The Film Council and Unison Trade Union, as well as several London and Brighton design agencies.
Job description:

To build up our portfolio of writers for several upcoming projects in association with Kendallcopywriting.co.uk, we’re on the lookout for a set of exceptional individuals who have:

Over 3 years experience

  • tried and tested method for getting to the heart of the story
  • A down-to-earth and rigorous approach to writing
  • A strong track record
  • Savoir-faire for giving clients strategically targeted copy
  • Hawk-eyes for the tiniest details

Skills Range:
We’re looking for:

  • a content writer
  • a content editor
  • a content strategist
  • a brand language specialist
  • a concept and ad copywriter
  • a web copywriter with strong UX awareness
  • an SEO writer

No hope on the boat – a life lesson from TEDx Brighton

delegate

I was lucky enough to get a ticket for TEDx Brighton, the conference that aimed to deliver a few “reasons to be cheerful”.

The conference was fantastic – a phenomenal experience considering none of the attendees paid a penny to attend. Tom Bailey, the organiser, has a lot to be proud of. It was also a pleasure to watch two familiar locals, Anthony Mayfield and Will McInnes, deliver excellent talks.

However, my favourite bit of one big awesome day was hearing about Sally Kettle’s adventure’s in rowing the Atlantic. Sally told us a tale that sounded somewhat like a peculiar daydream, rather than something a person actually did. A spur of the moment decision to row the Atlantic ended when her  partner pulled out sick, so Sally called on her long-estranged mum. They then spent the next four months rowing together, across the actual Atlantic.

During the arduous voyage Sally would sometimes complain, “I hope the current changes direction” or “I hope the weather holds out for us” or “I hope we reach land soon”. Eventually Sally’s mum snapped, “Stop hoping for things. Hope does nothing to change anything. Hope is not an action plan. If you want to reach land sooner, row harder. There’s no hope on the boat.”

There’s no hope on the boat!

I love this idea. When Sally first mentioned her catchphrase, it sounded very bleak. “No hope” – doesn’t sound great, does it? But the meaning is incredibly positive, because it’s a call to arms. It’s an encitement to take charge, to take control and to stop waiting for things to happen.

So if you ever catch yourself hoping, or praying, for things to change, stop. Less hope, more rowing.

Should web copy look consistent? Or interestingly different?

Uniformity

Should web copy look the same on similar pages of a website?

For example, if you have ten product pages, should the copy look consistent across those ten pages? Should the copy use the same formatting and follow exactly the same pattern (eg opening question, list of benefits, explantory paragraph, call to action)?

While it might seem desirable to use a consistent approach, this does bring problems.

Firstly, you can quickly find yourself trying to force content into a shape that doesn’t work.

The other problem, I believe, is that your ten pages (or whatever) all look the same. And they may even read the same, or have echoes of each other. Kinda boring, no?

What do you think?

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